You're right, I was using the term hook wrong. Sorry about that.A Future in Noise wrote: ↑Wed May 03, 2023 23:17 CESTTo me "hook" means something happenening very quickly, within one or two bars. I like my chorus, but to me it's soothong, for some strange reason, despite the lyrics.
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- Thu May 04, 2023 02:30 CEST
- Forum: Songwriting Competition
- Topic: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC068 April 2023 - Winners announced
- Replies: 76
- Views: 33356
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC068 April 2023 - results in preparation
- Wed May 03, 2023 23:03 CEST
- Forum: Songwriting Competition
- Topic: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC068 April 2023 - Winners announced
- Replies: 76
- Views: 33356
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC068 April 2023 - results in preparation
The Exponent – I really like it. I do think it could benefit from more in the sub frequency range. The bass is really only in the low to mid-lows. Maybe layer in a pure sub layer with the bass to give it more low end. Hey man, thanks for the valuable feedback, really appreciate it! The basses do ha...
- Wed May 03, 2023 22:57 CEST
- Forum: Songwriting Competition
- Topic: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC068 April 2023 - Winners announced
- Replies: 76
- Views: 33356
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC068 April 2023 - results in preparation
Maybe put some more distinction on the hook, is wasn’t initially sure if the song had a hook until I took a closer listen. Where is the hook? (I apologize for being extremely brief, myself, in my comments. But I simply didn't have the energy this month. Still think I followed the rules.) By hook I ...
- Tue May 02, 2023 02:43 CEST
- Forum: Songwriting Competition
- Topic: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC068 April 2023 - Winners announced
- Replies: 76
- Views: 33356
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC068 April 2023 - results in preparation
Hello All, I spent a couple of hours listening and typing out my feedback but when I went to submit, I was met with a message about website maintenance and lost it all. I am not going to have time to go back through everything and provide feedback before the deadline so sorry everyone. Really tough ...
- Wed Apr 19, 2023 05:24 CEST
- Forum: Songwriting Competition
- Topic: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC068 April 2023 - Winners announced
- Replies: 76
- Views: 33356
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC068 April 2023 - Submissions until 24-04-2023 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Hello Everyone, For this month's challenge, the image made me think of Nickleback's Photograph. With that in mind, I decided to write a rock/metal track. I didn't really stick to any theme beyond that; I just took that initial impression and ran with it. I know I'm well above the LUFS target; if I g...
- Fri Mar 31, 2023 04:04 CEST
- Forum: Songwriting Competition
- Topic: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC067 March 2023 - Winners announced
- Replies: 121
- Views: 37175
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC067 March 2023 - Voting until 01-APR-2023 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Hello Everyone, This month I had some fun messing with chordz again. It was something that I used to use a good bit, but that I moved away from. I'm not sure that this will get me back into it because it's a little wonky to route in FL Studio. I also tried making some lo-fi hip-hop which isn't somet...
- Tue Mar 14, 2023 08:11 CET
- Forum: Songwriting Competition
- Topic: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC067 March 2023 - Winners announced
- Replies: 121
- Views: 37175
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC067 March 2023 - Submissions until 24-03-2023 23:59 UTC+1/CET
Here is some feedback regarding the mixes: @Arelem Snare could be more in the front, I'm missing the punch. I consider your entry as Hip Hop-is Lofi sound, so I want that "smack" on the drums. Kick could be a bit more clearer and separated from the bass, I would scoop the bass by 2-3db in...
- Sun Mar 12, 2023 21:15 CET
- Forum: Songwriting Competition
- Topic: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC067 March 2023 - Winners announced
- Replies: 121
- Views: 37175
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC067 March 2023 - Submissions until 24-03-2023 23:59 UTC+1/CET
Hello All, I used chorz to 'generate' some chords for me. The main progression is being strummed out in the guitar parts. I also have a synth playing the chords with some inversions and added 5th or 7th notes. The progression I ended up with is F#min i VII i v III VII i v. The track is lofi-esque bu...
- Mon Mar 06, 2023 18:46 CET
- Forum: Songwriting Competition
- Topic: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC066 February 2023 - Winners announced
- Replies: 67
- Views: 33055
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC066 February 2023 - Winners announced
I just want to say thanks to everyone as well as congratulations. This was a super competitive month and everyone did great. As for Treyt nah man, don't be weirded out. It's a contest and you played it better so you won. The bonus points are part of it. Besides that, you had a great entry. Really, a...
- Sun Mar 05, 2023 20:00 CET
- Forum: Songwriting Competition
- Topic: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC066 February 2023 - Winners announced
- Replies: 67
- Views: 33055
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC066 February 2023 - Winners announced
Actually, not counting the penalty deduction, you "missed out" on 5 points, @Arelem. 1pt lost because of the filename that Soundcloud provided me. 2pts each for the maximum signal peak going over -1dBTP, and the loudness being higher than -14LUFS 1pt penalty for your entry not being downl...