Thank you everyone for your helpful feedback.
I don't know when I will have the time to work on the old projects, but it sure helps a lot for future songs.
Special thanks to Mr. Fox for taking the time to give such a thorough feedback and encouragement during and after the game.
2024-MAY-01 Info: Check out our current running Songwriting Competition 081 - which offers an interesting twist and a focus on sound design.